AI Writing Pattern Fixes

Paragraph Opener Trap

Scan first word of each paragraph - if 3+ start with "This/The/It" = robotic

Vary with: "Meanwhile", "Consider", "Beyond that", action verbs, specific nouns

Lead with action: "Marketing increased" not "The marketing team increased"

Rhythm Monotony Trap

Avoid same sentence length patterns - mix 5-word punches with 20-word flows

Use strategic fragments. For emphasis. For pace breaks.

Read aloud test: monotone rhythm = boring

Vague Claim Trap

Replace adjectives with numbers: "significant growth" → "40% growth"

Swap evaluations for evidence: "impressive results" → "cut response time from 3s to 300ms"

Delete weasel words: somewhat, fairly, quite, rather, slightly

List Overuse Trap

Use prose when explaining relationships or building arguments

Use bullets only for instructions, features, options

Flow test: if bullets feel choppy, try connected sentences

Parallel Structure Breaks

Match verb forms: "hiking, swimming, reading" not "hiking, swimming, to read"

Match sentence patterns: "codes fast, debugs thoroughly, ships daily"

Keep same grammatical structure in lists

Transition Word Crutches

Avoid: Furthermore, Moreover, Additionally, In conclusion

Use echo technique: end paragraph with concept X, start next with concept X

Pick up last idea and expand naturally

Voice Drift in Long Documents

Tone drift check: mark every 200 words - same person speaking?

Pick 3-5 key phrases and use consistently throughout

Don't switch from beginner-friendly to expert jargon mid-document

Word Economy Traps

Cut phrases: "in order to" → "to", "due to the fact that" → "because"

One verb wins: "make improvement" → "improve", "conduct investigation" → "investigate"

80% rule: can you say it in 80% of words? Do it.

Nominalization Trap

Use verbs not nouns: "implementation of" → "implement"

Action over abstraction: "decision-making process" → "decide"

Zombie noun test: -tion, -ment, -ness endings often hide better verbs